Dear Future APELC-er,
Congrats for signing up for this course! All lot of your peers probably warned you against taking this class due to its formidable reputation in the past. Fear not. It's really not that bad.
The truth is the most challenging part about this class for me was taking tests. I've always had a love of writing, which definitely helped me in the course along with my grade, however my test-taking skills were not up to par. The class tests both your ability to analyze a text, whether or not you grasped its purpose, how the author achieved that purpose, etc., and your ability to take what you've learned from other writers and apply it to your own work. There is definitely a learning curve required with this course, but it is almost guaranteed that everyone will improve in some aspect.
I think the best way to get the most out of this course would be to keep an open mind. It's pointless to go into expecting the worst; it will be a challenge, there will be grades that you're not used to getting, and you will have to work hard to get an A or a B. But to me this class was so worth the extra effort: it was truly enjoyable, and my writing and analysis definitely improved over the course of the year.
Work hard but don't stress too much. Mr. Yost will say this a lot over the year so get used to it: it's only school. (I rolled my eyes the first time I heard that, but looking back I appreciate the encouragement so much more. It gave me a new perspective that I never fully understand till now.)
Good luck! You'll be fine!
Liz
Tuesday, June 10, 2014
Tuesday, June 3, 2014
TOW 29 - Was He Justified? (The Armstrong Lie)
As much as the easiest solution is to deem Lance Armstrong in the wrong, the circumstances do not allow for such a black-and-white answer. Whether or not Lance Armstrong was justified in using and lying about using performance enhancing drugs remains a controversy today. Arguments vary from each end of the spectrum as in he was completely justified or unjustified in his actions. The most conceivable argument is that Armstrong was justified in his doping, however his extended lie was inappropriate and short-sighted.
Doping was the norm of Armstrong's era. The various testimonies explicitly stated that just about all of the top cyclists were accused of or found guilty of using performance enhancers. In order to not only compete, but also thrive in this line of work at the time most had to use these drugs. Although it may not have been ethical, the audience of this documentary can be sympathetic to Armstrong's position; almost everyone has been in a situation in which one must decide whether a specific circumstance rationalizes breaking the rules. One testimony stated that we could have accepted Armstrong's doping because everyone else had been doing the same, but it was his constant denial that irked the public and the officials.
Armstrong's nagging rebuttals were the most infuriating part of his doping scandal. Numerous first-hand witnesses with obvious credibility snitched on Armstrong, but neither he nor his devoted fans would recognize anything the opposition said. Armstrong avidly protested the accusations and viciously attacked anyone behind them. Armstrong lied and got caught. He has no excuses and no one to blame but himself. If Armstrong had admitted to his drug use early on it is likely that his name would not live in infamy as it does today.
It is easy to reflect on Armstrong's career criticizing his decisions and denouncing his name; however in that moment Armstrong was genuinely terrified for his future and decided to do what he believed was the best of the worst options. As viewers of this documentary and commentators of the world's issues, it is important to remember that we were not in the shoes of this person at that moment. We did not live their moments, so who are we to judge them? If every bad decision were publicized no one would be remembered for his or her good judgement.
Doping was the norm of Armstrong's era. The various testimonies explicitly stated that just about all of the top cyclists were accused of or found guilty of using performance enhancers. In order to not only compete, but also thrive in this line of work at the time most had to use these drugs. Although it may not have been ethical, the audience of this documentary can be sympathetic to Armstrong's position; almost everyone has been in a situation in which one must decide whether a specific circumstance rationalizes breaking the rules. One testimony stated that we could have accepted Armstrong's doping because everyone else had been doing the same, but it was his constant denial that irked the public and the officials.
Armstrong's nagging rebuttals were the most infuriating part of his doping scandal. Numerous first-hand witnesses with obvious credibility snitched on Armstrong, but neither he nor his devoted fans would recognize anything the opposition said. Armstrong avidly protested the accusations and viciously attacked anyone behind them. Armstrong lied and got caught. He has no excuses and no one to blame but himself. If Armstrong had admitted to his drug use early on it is likely that his name would not live in infamy as it does today.
It is easy to reflect on Armstrong's career criticizing his decisions and denouncing his name; however in that moment Armstrong was genuinely terrified for his future and decided to do what he believed was the best of the worst options. As viewers of this documentary and commentators of the world's issues, it is important to remember that we were not in the shoes of this person at that moment. We did not live their moments, so who are we to judge them? If every bad decision were publicized no one would be remembered for his or her good judgement.
Tuesday, May 27, 2014
TOW 28 - The Armstrong Lie (2013)
The story starts out as a documentary recording the comeback of Lance Armstrong in 2009, but after Armstrong was caught for the doping scandal in 2009 director Alex Gibney demanded an explanation. Opening with Armstrong's interview with Oprah in 2013 in which he admitted to using a variety of banned-substances throughout his career, the movie tracks back into his career. Armstrong was constantly accused of doping, and he fervently denied any association with drugs, viciously attacking any who said otherwise. Armstrong burned bridges with colleagues and alienated himself from thousands who believed his guilt, but his experience with cancer made him a saint: people were willing to look past his supposed misconduct because he was a symbol for overcoming crippling odds. Eventually Armstrong was caught. His reasons for doping were justified. His reason for lying was not.
(http://www.impawards.com/2013/thumbs/sq_armstrong_lie.jpg) |
The unique narrative structure of this film allowed Gibney to play off the audience's emotions while impartially narrating Armstrong's complex choices. By opening with the Oprah interview, a traumatic moment for the dedicated fans and even the dogmatic accusers, Gibney is foreshadowing that his movie will be emotionally draining. This movie will holistically look at the facts no matter how upsetting they may be. It goes back to explain the history for anyone unaware of what happened, with occasional recent interviews detailing what really was happening. As the chronology goes on and the story becomes closer to the present, Armstrong isn't necessarily relatable, but it is more understood why he did what he did.
Gibney's use of testimony provides credibility to the why Armstrong was cheating and also adds a feeling of indignation from the viewers that he did it for this long and lied about it. The interviews showed that everyone was doping and the only way to truly compete was to join in. The witnesses also showed that some of these people knew what was happening, spoke out, and Lance shot them down. This use of testimony can be interpreted as a hint at Gibney's feelings of hurt but also his slight empathy towards Armstrong.
Overall this movie demonstrated a specific person's history that was so twisted it highlighted the prevalent infamy in a renowned sport. It also exemplifies that nothing is black and white, judging someone without fully understanding their situation is never an accurate perception.
Tuesday, May 20, 2014
TOW 27 - Reflection
A lot has happened in the past school year, regarding life both within and outside of school. Within this class specifically I can definitely observe a notable improvement in my writing, outstanding in my TOWs. My early summer TOWs demonstrate my extreme effort to sound sophisticated as if I knew what I was talking about without yet taking the class. As the school year starts the texts take on a more simplistic style; I was trying to make sure I understood the basics of these rhetorical analyses before I went on to more eloquence. Towards the latter part of the year, you can notice more organization and better analysis of texts that demonstrate my growth and understanding of the topic compared to the beginning of the year. I think through this process I have mastered taking a piece of evidence, analyzing the rhetorical device, and then divulging on why that device is effective. There is still much I could do to improve, such as creating an effective hook and then a full-circle ending that expresses the, "So what?". These posts were helpful in the sense that they exposed me to different authors and genres while helping me to improve my analysis; however I feel it was a lengthy process that was never fully addressed in class.
Sunday, May 4, 2014
TOW 26 - Gardening for Climate Change (James Barilla)
Goldenrod - a plant Barilla often speaks of (http://www.gpnc.org/images/jpegs/plants/goldenrod_.jpg) |
In every corner of the world, in every moment of history,
there has always a divide of between social classes. Social mobility is not
available to everyone, but many do have the ability to leave in search of a
fresh start – including plants. James Barilla’s opinion editorial provides a
crafty commentary on the effects of nonnative species, and although he only
strictly comments on the nature of gardening, the reader can speculate from his
text that there is deeper meaning. Through his two-part arrangement, shifting
tone, and central metaphor Barilla urges the audience to embrace inevitable
change of people, environment, and lifestyle.
Barilla’s
argument consists of the extended metaphor and then the ambiguous ending,
allowing the audience to draw their own conclusions. The beginning creates a
situation takes a complex situation and simplifies it to gardening. The
audience can understand this issue and is less likely to oppose any
controversial statements because it seems to be such a humble subject. Then
when Barilla makes a more general statement at the end the audience cannot
refute it: since readers can understand his argument earlier, they are less
likely to disagree when it is applied to society with the same logic.
Constantly
shifting his tone from objective to troubled, throughout his text Barilla
creates different appeals to his audience and different levels of
understanding. He presents facts to the audience revealing his credibility and
elaborates on the repercussions revealing his humanity. The audience can
understand the circumstances and then why they are important to each person.
Overall the
metaphor Barilla uses is extremely powerful in its ability to convey a deeper
message. Plants are one of the most complex and revered organisms on this
planet as are humans; the comparison between the two shows that if plants must
adapt to new situations then it is probable that humans must eventually as
well.
Barilla
never directly relates his discussion of plants to the natural state of humans.
All he says that creates this relation is, “We need to start thinking not just about what used to be, but
what could be.” Barilla is urging us to let go of strict habits and customs,
with no room for growth and innovation, and to embrace our future: the uncertain
nature of certain change.
Sunday, April 27, 2014
TOW 25 - Walk the Moon performance @ iTunes Festival
Popularity is an abstract concept.
Each has his or her own perception of allure and attraction, but what grants
someone national appeal? A single person or a group of people is able to gain
the love and affection of thousands of people, despite each person having a
different perspective on perfection. Musicians are able to pull at the hearts
of millions not only across a country but also across the seas. It would be
naïve to say their popularity is solely based on their music. It is live
performances that create the magnetism of international stardom; it is these
that allow small town bands from Ohio to create a far-reaching impact. Walk the
Moon’s iTunes Festival performance demonstrates the persuasive forces of
appearance, energy, and interaction, the basis of what distinguishes memorable
musicians.
The
appearance of Walk the Moon is representative of their music, automatically
informing its listeners of its purpose. The painted streaks of purple and white
lining each member’s face set the band into a unique genre – automatically the
audience realizes the band intends for this concert experience to be a fun one.
Paint is associated with creativity and imagination, two qualities that can
definitely create a good show.
A show
should be energetic and lively; when a band presents those traits in its
performance, it heightens the overall experience. The concerts that feel on the
brink, the atmosphere practically ready to burst – those are the shows to
remember. Walk the Moon is constantly jumping up and down, dancing around the
stage, making a fool of themselves, in order to encourage the audience to do
the same. It is essentially this spirit that spreads throughout the audience,
and it is that spirit that spreads the audience to an international level.
When a band
interacts with its audience it creates a connection between the two, a feeling
that is coveted by most. When Walk the Moon talks to its audience, encourages
them to dance, they are creating a more intimate atmosphere; even though the
audience consists of thousands of people, the band is interacting to them as a
whole. That ability of performance is not only impressive, but also coveted.
Walk the
Moon was not known by many in London until the iTunes festival. They were not
known in this area until the Made in America festival of 2013. Performances are
what spurred its fame. While in a perfect world it would be the artistry that generated
fame; in reality it is the band’s poise and how the portray themselves that
does it.
http://irocktheshot.com/wp-content/uploads/2012/07/walk-the-moon-at-firefly-festival-papeo-281.jpg |
Wednesday, April 23, 2014
TOW 24 - Love and Limerence – the Experience of Being in Love (Dorothy Tennov)
Love is never simple. After
devouring this scientific marvel of a book, Tennov makes it clear that the
popular notions of love tend to be faulty misconceptions. One must consider all
of the various types of love, which, after an extensive and lengthy Google
search, can be summed up in four general types: affection, friendship, romance,
and unconditional. Tennov explores the depth of limerence, a sentiment
bordering between infatuation and love but is not necessarily either. Honing in
on a controversial theory in the psychological community, Tennov delves into
the reality of limerence and its threatening potential using credible
consensuses and graphic metaphors.
Tennov’s
work demonstrates that she has the mind of a researcher: whether collecting her
own data or generating theses from experts, Tennov strings together a variety
of evidence to reach a valid conclusion. The foundation of Tennov’s study began
with a compilation of student opinions, all stating very similar experiences in
love. After analyzing these and identifying the trends, the conclusion Tennov
develops is not only logical for herself, but also to the reader. If all the
evidence points to the conclusion Tennov draws, no matter how strange or
unaccepted, then it is only sensible to accept her thesis as rational.
Drawing
parallels between complex, experimental concepts and simple, daily-life
functions creates a sense of comfort within the reader making the text easier
to understand. Toys and games are at the comprehensive level of a toddler. Therefore,
when Tennov states “you find
yourself a player in a process (love) that bears unquestionable similarity to a
game,” the simplicity of one idea transcends to the other” (67). An extremely
sophisticated style of writing, the comparisons Tennov uses allows the readers
to study complex thoughts on an understandable level. If the simple-minded can
accept her thesis as true, then it is at least worth exploring the validity of
that theory.
What are
usually just words on paper are transformed into real-life situations through
Tennov’s provoking and thoughtful analysis. Skeptics cannot deny that Tennov’s studies
and evidence are cogent if not concrete; the ingenuous peoples who are not
well-versed in scientific jargon cannot deny that Tennov’s theories make sense.
If the two opposite ends of a spectrum, educated versus the… less educated, can
accept a theory, everything else should simply fall into place.
Tuesday, April 22, 2014
IRB Intro Post: MP 4
Politics and feminism - two notions that have historically not meshed well together. Extraordinary, Ordinary People is a memoir of family and the autobiography of Condoleezza Rice detailing her life through the civil rights movement, her life in the world of politics, and her life in values and principles. With the daunting task of college essays on the horizon, a common question is "Describe your role model." A family member suggested I read this book as a stepping stone in order to determine the qualities I look for and value in others. Rice has always been a name in the back of my mine, along with her titles, but I've never thought of her as more than that; after hearing rave reviews of not only her life stories, but also her writing styles, I decided this book is definitely worth a shot.
Sunday, March 30, 2014
TOW 23 - Make Poverty History (Tim Worstall)
Many believe it is
the goal of economics to rid this world of poverty. There have been theories on
how to approach and achieve this altruistic goal; one of the most promising and
controversial tactics would be the promotion and integration of impoverished countries
into the economy. Tim Worstall uses jovial tone, litotes and syllogism to
reason that the hesitance towards this globalization is hypocritical,
contradicting the humanitarian policies and values previously established.
Through his almost
homey diction, Worstall charms his audience with his text’s cheerful tone. It
is unprecedented for an economics article proposing solutions to end poverty to
use words like “lovely” or state “the most delicious part of this argument...” With
a varied audience, from economic majors to high school students, the affable
diction makes Worstall’s text more approachable and the readers are therefore
more open to his viewpoint on a controversial subject.
Worstall uses
shrewd understatements to undermine opposition’s view on the integration of
poorer nations. If words were placed on a spectrum, Worstall would only use
words on either of the extremes like “best,” or “worst.” For example, regarding
Worstall’s rebuttal to the counterargument that globalization does not address
the impoverished in wealthy nations, “the worst that anyone says [about the
rise and fall of American wages] is that they have stagnated.” Worstall
simplifies the issues and solutions to a simple judgment and claim of value,
not only undermining the authority of opposition, but also implanting the idea
that his proposal is a simple solution.
Worstall addresses
the counterargument through a syllogistic approach and strengthens his argument
through this rebuttal. He argues that if people accept that taxing the rich
more than the poor is tolerable, and the impoverished in rich nations have a
greater income than those in impoverished nations, then therefore it is
illogical to criticize the globalization he proposes. This syllogism creates
the illusion of a flawless argument, almost like a mathematical proof that is
impossible to argue against.
Poverty is a
complex issue to address, and there is never an easy answer to solving this
problem; Worstall suggests that globalization is the simplest of the most
complex answers. It will take time, but the integration of impoverished nations
is the best bet to exterminating poverty.
http://static.guim.co.uk/sys-images/Guardian/Pix/pictures/2013/2/1/1359727149695/Poverty-in-Afghanistan-007.jpg |
Goals:
Effective analysis, good transitions, appropriate evidence
Effective analysis, good transitions, appropriate evidence
Sunday, March 23, 2014
TOW 22 - The Power of Prescription (Chicago Tribune)
The mental health field is dictated
by two professions: psychologists and psychiatrists. Many mesh these two
careers together as one, failing to acknowledge the unique qualifications and
distinctions of each. The easiest way to distinguish between the two lies in
the roots of the words: “-logy” means science or theory while “-iatry” means
medical treatment. The Chicago Tribune writers argue that this small
distinction is a big deal in the matter of prescription drugs. They argue that,
in response to the recent bill passed by the Illinois Senate, psychologists
should not be allowed to prescribe drugs because it puts patient safety at
risk.
The
Tribune’s arrangement of the editorial overall adds efficiency to the argument.
The editorial begins with background information, then its own thesis,
evidence, and reiteration of the thesis along with others who believe the same.
After introducing the reader to the issue at hand, and explaining why it is an
issue, the tribune leaves no room for interpretation by directly stating its
belief. It goes on to prove why that opinion is correct and then by reiterating
that that’s what these professionals, such as various mental agencies, believe
and so does the Tribune.
Arrangement
is a precisely used tool even in the sentence structure of the editorial. One
sentence that particularly stands out is when the Tribune introduces the issue:
“Now, psychologists — who
are not doctors — seek that power.” The inclusion of the word creates a sudden
tone to the psychologists’ demand; the interruption of the dashes makes the
writer’s insertion seem almost sarcastic. The way the writer constructed this
sentence, along with many others, serves a direct purpose to support the idea
that psychologists should not be allowed to write prescriptions.
The use of professionals’ opinions
through quotations adds credibility to the Tribune’s claim that psychologists
should not have the same prescription privileges as psychiatrists. The article
quotes, for example, Dr. Joan Anzia, who oversees psychiatric training at
Northwestern University’s Feinberg School of Medicine. Her cited opinon
supports the idea that psychologists should not prescribe because they would be
“grossly inadequate education be allowed to prescribe a substance that will
alter the function (and sometimes the structure) of their bodies and brains."
The fact that a professional supports this makes the reader nod their head in
agreement.
The overall arrange, syntax, and
quotations used by the Chicago Tribune all support its claim that psychologists
should not be given the power of prescription that belongs to psychiatrists and other doctors.
http://www.chicagotribune.com/news/opinion/editorials/ct-prescribe-mental-health-drugs-illiinois-edit-03-20140322,0,4679590.story |
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